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C+ "Nice first attempt but needs more work and polish particularly on dialogue, humour, character development and narrative flow. I think your style is more suited to children's books than adult comedy". This I'm sure was the mark and comment from the Creative Writing for TV professor who set this 1st year writing assignment.

The comment goes on to say, "You did successfully address one of the assignment's key goals to create a group of characters that demonstrate the most annoying characteristics of the millennial generation".

The greatest achievement of this show is that it went from a mediocre 1st year creative writing assignment to a funded tv show.

This is easy viewing on par with many sitcoms. Some people are out to be negative from the start.

This is most likely the worst thing I've ever seen in my life.

A group of self obsessed zoomers endlessly talk talk talking at each other, infinitely impressed with how clever they all think they are.

But no one's clever. They're self infatuated Peter Pan types, speaking the things they write on Twitter to get likes from other Peter Pan types. If talking in Twitter posts doesn't sound real, that's because it's not.

Snark followed by sarcasm followed by more snark. None of it's endearing, all of it is off-putting.

No one likes these kinds of people but themselves. No one outside of their bubble finds people like this bearable.

Oh, and the gimmicky "long take/one shot" style of filming a scene is far too on the nose. The camera, constantly moving to get the next bit of staging in frame, make sure everyone's blocked perfectly now HIT YOUR MARK AND SAY YOUR SNARKY LINE!

Yawn.

Far too much dialogue.

Just stop the characters talking incessantly; have them take a breath and actually do things. We might actually learn something about them that way.

As it stands, it was hard to feel I knew any of the characters and so impossible to care what happened to them.

And the comedy is very weak (e.g. The "joke" in the trailer about the reason for the rented room being so cheap).

Really funny- I loved it! Ignore all the bad reviews, I thought it was great. Relatable, comforting TV for a 20-something also trying to navigate life.