This looks like some art school project. It starts with a very poor script and goes downhill from there. There is a possibility that at least a few of the actors may eventually become satisfactory. Who knows what the distant future holds?
The camera work is an excellent example of everything you should not do, starting with the appalling excessively close-up shots. Poor framing, to the extent that peoples faces are only half in the shot don't help either. These sorts of issues make it extremely difficult to watch.
I'm assuming this is the first attempt by the director. Please, stay in school and continue with your lessons. Maybe there is something else you'll be good at.
