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<strong>13. Welche weiteren Datenschutzrechte haben Sie?</strong> | ||
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<strong>14. Datenschutzbeauftragte und Kontakt</strong> |
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The word docs say there are 14 points, but number 7 got deleted. Only 13 points remain.
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UA approved
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Attention! The version number is wrong!
Co-authored-by: Tim <67682506+Ein-Tim@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Tim <67682506+Ein-Tim@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Tim <67682506+Ein-Tim@users.noreply.github.com>
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Einstellungen Ihres Betriebssystems deaktivieren. Ihr Betriebssystem löscht die auf ihrem | ||
Smartphone gespeicherten Begegnungsdaten nach 14 Tagen automatisch. Falls Sie eine frühere |
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Typo:
"Ihr Betriebssystem löscht die auf ihrem Smartphone gespeicherten Begegnungsdaten nach 14 Tagen automatisch."
should be auf "Ihrem Smartphone"
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You can still use the export features to back up your stored digital COVID certificates and | ||
entries in your contact journal. If you wish to present a digital COVID certificate as | ||
8000 | proof, please note the information in Section Error: Reference source not found of the |
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"Section Error: Reference source not found"
is an error
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There are multiple issues with the updated texts. Please have a look again at both the iOS PR and the Android PR and make sure that all issues are fixed, also in the PDF that will go live on the website.
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Hi @Ein-Tim ,
we will look at the proposed changes and go through the documents again. Thank you very much!
Best Oliver
<strong>1. Beendigung der Datenverarbeitung</strong> | ||
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Am 1. Mai 2023 geht die Corona-Warn-App in den Ruhemodus. In der Folge wird der bisherige |
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Eventuell anstatt "In der Folge" --> Daraufhin
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Sobald die Corona-Warn-App im Ruhemodus ist, ist die Rücknahme der in der App erteilten | ||
Einverständniserklärungen nicht mehr möglich, aber auch nicht mehr nötig. Denn die auf Ihrem |
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Ich würde hier das Wort "Denn" rausnehmen
It would be good to have a new open PR to make comments on the text contents. |
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Die Risiko-Ermittlung ist eine Hauptfunktion der App. Sie dient dazu, Sie | |||
bei möglichen Begegnungen mit Corona-positiv getesteten Personen | |||
(Risiko-Begegnungen) länderübergreifend zu warnen, Ihr persönliches |
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Diesen Satz verstehe ich nicht: " Ihr persönliches"??
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The continuation is below: Ihr persönliches Infektionsrisiko zu bewerten und Ihnen Verhaltens- und Gesundheitshinweise zu geben.
Thanks @MikeMcC399 and @Ein-Tim. I'll open a new PR with the fixes <3 |
* Address comments from #5906. * Fix header in german text. Remove suggestions from Cindy.
Ticket.
Please compare the contents of the word documents found in the ticket with the changes made to the privacy files.