8000 Update privacy notice for EOL (EXPOSUREAPP-14955) by SamuraiKek · Pull Request #5906 · corona-warn-app/cwa-app-android · GitHub
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Update privacy notice for EOL (EXPOSUREAPP-14955) #5906

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Please compare the contents of the word documents found in the ticket with the changes made to the privacy files.

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<strong>13. Welche weiteren Datenschutzrechte haben Sie?</strong>
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<strong>14. Datenschutzbeauftragte und Kontakt</strong>
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The word docs say there are 14 points, but number 7 got deleted. Only 13 points remain.

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UA approved

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Attention! The version number is wrong!

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Co-authored-by: Tim <67682506+Ein-Tim@users.noreply.github.com>
Co-authored-by: Tim <67682506+Ein-Tim@users.noreply.github.com>
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Kudos, SonarCloud Quality Gate passed!    Quality Gate passed

Bug A 0 Bugs
Vulnerability A 0 Vulnerabilities
Security Hotspot A 0 Security Hotspots
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Einstellungen Ihres Betriebssystems deaktivieren. Ihr Betriebssystem löscht die auf ihrem
Smartphone gespeicherten Begegnungsdaten nach 14 Tagen automatisch. Falls Sie eine frühere
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Typo:

"Ihr Betriebssystem löscht die auf ihrem Smartphone gespeicherten Begegnungsdaten nach 14 Tagen automatisch."

should be auf "Ihrem Smartphone"

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You can still use the export features to back up your stored digital COVID certificates and
entries in your contact journal. If you wish to present a digital COVID certificate as
proof, please note the information in Section Error: Reference source not found of the
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"Section Error: Reference source not found"

is an error

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There are multiple issues with the updated texts. Please have a look again at both the iOS PR and the Android PR and make sure that all issues are fixed, also in the PDF that will go live on the website.

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Hi @Ein-Tim ,
we will look at the proposed changes and go through the documents again. Thank you very much!
Best Oliver

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<strong>1. Beendigung der Datenverarbeitung</strong>
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Am 1. Mai 2023 geht die Corona-Warn-App in den Ruhemodus. In der Folge wird der bisherige
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Eventuell anstatt "In der Folge" --> Daraufhin

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Sobald die Corona-Warn-App im Ruhemodus ist, ist die Rücknahme der in der App erteilten
Einverständniserklärungen nicht mehr möglich, aber auch nicht mehr nötig. Denn die auf Ihrem
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Ich würde hier das Wort "Denn" rausnehmen

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It would be good to have a new open PR to make comments on the text contents.

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Die Risiko-Ermittlung ist eine Hauptfunktion der App. Sie dient dazu, Sie
bei möglichen Begegnungen mit Corona-positiv getesteten Personen
(Risiko-Begegnungen) länderübergreifend zu warnen, Ihr persönliches
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Diesen Satz verstehe ich nicht: " Ihr persönliches"??

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The continuation is below: Ihr persönliches Infektionsrisiko zu bewerten und Ihnen Verhaltens- und Gesundheitshinweise zu geben.

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Thanks @MikeMcC399 and @Ein-Tim. I'll open a new PR with the fixes <3

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* Address comments from #5906.

* Fix header in german text. Remove suggestions from Cindy.
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